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What's wrong with my flyer? Feedback please..

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squizmo says

The mail:

1) Unfortunately the quality of your item is not up to our standards.

2) You will need to consider putting more work into the poster as it does not look good at the moment.

3) Quality of the typography as well as the graphics used are very low.

Reviewer: Ivor Padilla

What is wrong with file that they don’t approve it?!..I saw worse up… Thanks in advanced.

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Foos says

I think Ivor told you everything you need to improve.

In my opinion the flyer is not unique enough. There are too many files like yours here on the marketplace.

Make more typography versions.

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ShermanJackson says
Foos said
I think Ivor told you everything you need to improve.

In my opinion the flyer is not unique enough. There are too many files like yours here on the marketplace.

Make more typography versions.

I have to disagree….In terms of being “UNIQUE”, I would have to say that IT IS UNIQUE . For a change there are no champagne bottles for graphics in the flyer.

Maybe you could make the colors of the roses more striking and “less bland”...

Some minor fixes and this will be selling!

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squizmo says
ShermanJackson said
Foos said
I think Ivor told you everything you need to improve.

In my opinion the flyer is not unique enough. There are too many files like yours here on the marketplace.

Make more typography versions.

I have to disagree….In terms of being “UNIQUE”, I would have to say that IT IS UNIQUE . For a change there are no champagne bottles for graphics in the flyer.

Maybe you could make the colors of the roses more striking and “less bland”...

Some minor fixes and this will be selling!

thanks for your support sherman, i try..

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chrisatlemon says

What struck me is the font of the “Valentines” which doesn’t seem to flow with the rest.

I also feel there is too much of a difference between the top part and the bottom half. The top have been clamouring really and, the bottom part being bland monochrome.

Hope this helps

Chris

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squizmo says
chrisatlemon said
What struck me is the font of the “Valentines” which doesn’t seem to flow with the rest.

I also feel there is too much of a difference between the top part and the bottom half. The top have been clamouring really and, the bottom part being bland monochrome.

Hope this helps

Chris

thanks chris, i just tried to make different from the others, but it is not accepted.. I get to belive you..

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