i can´t believe that i sell some stuff on the platform.
we worked some month on the design-html , first i try to put it in as psd-template it called , make a site template
“I’ve stated above (the design needs overall, general improvements). With further improvements I may be able to provide more specific feedback.”
please give us more specific feedback. and your really opinion . thanks
Oh i really like that design! The slider is hot Whats a little disturbing is the big contrast between text color and text shadow, make that shadow a bit darker. Something with the text is not right either, why don’t you try a sans serif font? And maybe a littttle bigger. The gradient in the footer has too much contrast, maybe remove it in general and make it plain black? I like your contact form, but the Text next to the textfields is neither aligned to the bottom nor centered.
I hope I could help, greetings, GC
Hey drdesign, please allow me to participate
From what I see the structural design is ok but it seems the significant aspect for you to improve maybe the inconsistency in the typographical mix between serif type fonts and sans-serif type fonts, also when mouse hover above a paragraph in homepage the cursor became hand… I don’t say its bad but just not a common practice, especially when each of them has ”—> more” icon and their big title..
good luck for next time (me too!)
- Sold between 100 000 and 250 000 dollars
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There are some alignment problems, for example in the 4 columns area. Otherwise, I like it overall
I like it!
Can’t really see what more you can do to get it approved. Alignment seems good to me and it should be fine if you have used the 960 grid system.
Im pretty sure this would definitely get approved as a wordpress theme. But that’s a lot more work
Hi again Dr!
I checked again today and am glad to see you made some changes i suggested, and I like it better now! (The light version is my favorite) May I give you some more suggestions? You need more padding around the 1, 2, 3, 4 graphics. At the footer hover you might wanna keep the color: white so only the li:hover gets darker. And a bit more line-height would improve it – 1.5em looks good, I tried. The “more” link needs to be centered to the image. And I suggest more whitespace between the two columns and the four columns, horizontally. The eMail form has borders on my end, but I bet thats just cause ur workin on it atm.
Hope I could help again