Revision 2 Rejected. Anyone got ideas for me?

Out of those I would definitely go with model a). Even though it still the same font is the only one that does it for me in terms of balance.

Cheers

Chris

chrisatlemon said
Out of those I would definitely go with model a). Even though it still the same font is the only one that does it for me in terms of balance.

Agreed!

And in my opinion alternative D has an awful font.

Interesting choice. I posted A vs B on forrst and got a resounding B vote. I’m struggling to get something that feels balanced. I will try with B and see how things go. Thanks for your input.

Hehe, I know, I saw your post on Forrst, too

C.

And again it’s been rejected, I’ve logged a ticket this time as I’m not sure it’s just the design I’m being rejected? Think it might be down to how I’m packaging it?