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0bsessiveali says
So today I was rejectedfor the 30th time:( and I just wanted to know how i could improve my login box http://3.s3.envato.com/files/25505765/Login%20Box%20preview.png Reason: “An interesting idea but you need to work over the general design here, considering the overall appearance. The file is a little too simplistic in appearance and things like the layout, typeface selection and overall concept need tweaking.” any help and ideas are Greatly appreciated:(
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onlycreativeworks says

I think it should be more legible. There is a poor contrast now. Try higher opacity for login box. Maybe you can also add some buttons e.g. for “Login” link.

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Amrhamza says

Ok, 30th for this item or in Total, If its for this item YOU ’RE MY HERO , but if its in total you didn’t pass the first mile stone of rejection yet :reallyevil: its almost impossible to read with the background photo.

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ShermanJackson says

Way to simple and the background makes it almost impossible to “login”.

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themeDNA says

I would work on the contrast of the element, and improve the composition.

Give this a read, it will help you achieve a better result in your designs.

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Amrhamza says

I want more articles like this

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0bsessiveali says

Thanks everyone! I Just Re Submitted It:) Mythic I Love This Article http://www.alistapart.com/articles/whitespace It Really is Helping Me <3

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0bsessiveali says

Amrhamza, Just For this Item:) am I Hero Now?<3

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themeDNA says

@0bsessiveali

Glad it’s helping.

Check out some of their other articles as well , they all offer sound advice :)

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