Hey kokodesign, for my opinion im sorry to say this but the fonts are horrible… You should work on the fonts too much, for example you can do 3D fonts. I think the main thing is that you should improve all the fonts
Apart from the font choice itself the main header looks very blurry. That’s probably due to some sort of global effect you added, but it just takes away from the definition. That really needs to be worked on.
In general I think the ideas nice and this could be a crisp and clear flyer if you put the polish into it.