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xstortionist says

Hello everyone,

Just wanted to get some C&C feedback on a landing page that I’m currently working on.

Please take a look and let me know your thoughts:

http://www.metrixwebsolutions.com/landing-pages/mediagroup/index.html

Thanks! :P

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ProgressionStudios says

Here is some basic feedback for your landing page:

  • My immediate response is very cheesy business picture.
  • The colors work but might be too bright overall for many companies. I assume you have other color schemes that are toned down.
  • Name that document! No “untitled document”.
  • Good job on adding all the necessary features like video, social links, and testimonials.
  • Consider using images from the Envato Asset library to fill the “Recent Work” section instead of having “Pic goes here”. I think it looks a little text heavy at the bottom.
  • Good luck and I hope it gets accepted.

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    xstortionist says

    Here is some basic feedback for your landing page:
  • My immediate response is very cheesy business picture.
  • The colors work but might be too bright overall for many companies. I assume you have other color schemes that are toned down.
  • Name that document! No “untitled document”.
  • Good job on adding all the necessary features like video, social links, and testimonials.
  • Consider using images from the Envato Asset library to fill the “Recent Work” section instead of having “Pic goes here”. I think it looks a little text heavy at the bottom.
  • Good luck and I hope it gets accepted.

    Very good feedback. I’m going to change up the colors, I don’t even have a different color selection for the theme.

    Any suggestion on the picture area? I’m at a loss with it to be honest with you & need a second opinion.

    I will def. name the web page.

    What about on the last row of text on the footer I put a “subcribe to our newsletter” section? Maybe that will make it less texty (is texty even a word?).

    What about the sidebar? Does anyone think it’s a bit too radical? Maybe I should rethink that section?

    View our portfolio. I’m thinking I might not even need to say that there. I think it’s pretty obvious. What do you think?

    More feedback please!

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