Posts by yorlin

josweb said
How about the spoon coming from the centre of the clock. To look more like a ‘Q’ and the hand of the clock?

I believe that placing spoon in center of clock will be not so good as currently is. Narciss, also be sure that your text is easy to change and it’s not expanded.

Nice I believe that max time for review can be shifted to a month

Kak ya ponyal, esli v logo ispol’zuesh primitivy(kvadrat, treugolnik, krujok), to vse otlichno…kogda pytaeshsya sdelat chto-to bolee ser’eznoe nujno vylezat’ do bleska. Po teme: poprobuj sdelat’ sam logo bolee elegantnym, ne takim tolstym, priblizitelno v tolschinu samoy tolstoy chasti lojki i minutnye risky chut’ poton’she, nu i font mojet kakoy bolee po stilyu podhodyaschiy pod Q iz logo. Udachi! Nadeyus’ hvatit terpeniya so zdeshnimi revyuverami i taki dob’esh logo i ego primut!

But I found great work http://graphicriver.net/item/restaurant-logo/903135?WT.ac=category_thumb&WT.seg_1=category_thumb&WT.z_author=domibit with nice shapes,colors and font and here is one more http://graphicriver.net/item/abstract-design/901678?WT.ac=category_thumb&WT.seg_1=category_thumb&WT.z_author=domibit ... I’m really confused…

Thanks to all, but its still rejected, as I understand everything is wrong, from font to shapes and colors

“Unfortunately I cannot accept this file because the main design is not aesthetically ready for logo templates. The shapes, drawings, colors combination, choice of font, design and the overall concept still required improvements and refinements.”

xstortionist said

yorlin said
xstortionist, should I include all color variation in eps or just preview variant?

Both EPS and preview.

Thanks

xstortionist, should I include all color variation in eps or just preview variant?

xstortionist said
Great concept, poor font execution. Find a more elegant font, make different color variations and you will more than likely be on your way to approval land!

xstortionist, thanks.

quickandeasy said
Hi Yorlin, welcome to the River!

I am not at all skilled in the area or UI’s or device vectors etc, but my comment would be that right now your item is lacking in detail.

What you have so far is good, but it needs to be great.

Consider studying the marketplace for similar items and studying the quality of those that sell well.

Here are a few items I would suggest looking at:

• http://graphicriver.net/item/sleek-phone-mockup/234922
• http://graphicriver.net/item/idevice-music-artist-app-user-interface/894618
• http://graphicriver.net/item/tablet-pc-psdpng-mockup/159454
• http://graphicriver.net/item/shinny-tablet-mockup/300156
• http://graphicriver.net/item/mobilisimo-mobile-phone-mobile-pad-mockups/400964
• http://graphicriver.net/item/stylish-android-phone-app-showcase-mockup/755525
• http://graphicriver.net/item/tablet-display-template-hires-smart-object/238092

Good luck in uploading new items

quickandeasy, thanks! This works are great, and I’ll try to refine my work in such manner.

Lifer said
...I personally REALLY like the idea/concept and I wouldn’t change too much about the Logo it self but, what the reviewers might find unacceptable is the glass part, maybe you add some gloss to it and lighten the grey a little…Also the ends of the glass part could be better if they were a little sharper instead of blocked ( I hope you understand what I meant )...Also, I like the font choice for this kind of logo but I bet the reviewers see it differently (they know their job though) use something more simple but BOLD as well and make the color of the text same as the brightest point of the wine color and I think it would look better when the “OLD” was the color of the glass and the “Wine” was the color of the wine. I hope those were the droids you were looking for…I mean the answers : ) Chears, Lifer!

Thank you, Lifer! I’ll try your suggestions and will see how it change reviewer’s mind