Posts by DarkstarDesigns

No problem at all feel free to email me once you have made some changes!

To me the white line are not strong enough they need to be thinker or they wont hold up well when the logo is smaller

The sun need improving as it is quite pixelated may work being solid with a white stoke around the ship.

The ship could be made more exciting bit more curve to the lines.

Over all you have a good base just needs to be refined, the blue orange colour way works best you need to choose others that complement the design better as the red and blue looks weak.

Check out some of these logos and look at the flow of the line that help bring the logos to life and make them more emotive

Hope i was of some help

This is a direct copy of a wallpaper i used to have not sure if you have even remade, or on the other hand if you made it you have given it away for free elsewhere either way it does not bode well for you.

Your not going to have a bad time on these market place if you take others works and pass it off as you own

you should be ok after making these changes, you had a solid base!

To me it more the way you have used the font than the font itself,

saw you use blue box white text, very nice then white box black text not so nice, just changing the black to blue would hold it together better.

Also you have poor alignment in some areas of the text, just need to centralize and make sure spacing is equal this should help polish of the piece.

Not a fan at all.

We have bad weather makes us sad

Very unfriendly, look at people in the street you don’t know and you will be getting in a fight pretty quick.

Economy is pretty bad

Taxes are wasted on free loaded

Free medical but it is so bad i have private anyway!

Text is not clear or readable

• black text poor choice for contrast

• starburst is weak, should be behind the girl and greatly improved

• theme does not hold together need to be thought out more

• Text is not clear or readable main title does not grab attention

• boat looks very poor

• psychedelic colors are not ocean related

• create better title maybe like it is bursting out of ware with nice splash effect

• Hope not been to blunt, it is one of those cases where i would start again but just more thought into how all the element can blend tgether and supporst each other at the moment it is just a collection of random elements.

  bellow are some sort of simillar themed item try to see the quality your going again and bring something new to the table. http://graphicriver.net/item/latin-summer-party-flyer/2621596?WT.ac=search_thumb&WT.seg_1=search_thumb&WT.z_author=saltshaker911 http://graphicriver.net/item/splash-pool-party-flyer-template/2491841?WT.ac=search_thumb&WT.seg_1=search_thumb&WT.z_author=jellygraphics http://graphicriver.net/item/spring-party/1858682?WT.ac=search_thumb&WT.seg_1=search_thumb&WT.z_author=magikpoink http://graphicriver.net/item/love-on-paradise/2845049?WT.ac=search_thumb&WT.seg_1=search_thumb&WT.z_author=osky

800mb is an acceptable size, with internet connection these days it should not be a problem!

ToivoMedia said
Yes, I noticed that a few months ago. I assumed that they were no longer allowing people to link to outside sites. But I don’t know if that’s the reason for it.

if yuo see the link here there are item from GR that have been added in the last few days it s killing me i have spent hours this afternoon trying to figure it out http://www.adobe.com/cfusion/marketplace/index.cfm?event=marketplace.home&marketplaceid=2

I have been away from the adobe marketplace for a while, tried to upload a new item, but the problem i had was there was only the option to add file for download, you always used to be able to add your own url this just did not happen.

when i left the field blank and tried to upload it said add your own url or download. has anybody else had this kind of problem?